When you were in high school did you have your future to motivate you? What about your friends? I know you family had to motvate you Because mine shure does. I will graduate in 2012 because of the three “Fs” family, friends, and future. Because of the three “Fs” I will fill forced to graduate.
The first “F”, my family, has given me tots of advice in high school. They can give me advice because they have been through high school before. My mother and father keep saying “Trey this is a new start. You have a clean slate.” My older sisters Kiana and Cherie always give me advice. They also listen to me when I need to start to someone. They always listed and know what to say.
The next “F” is my future. When I graduate in 2012 I want to go to Georgia University. With me having good grades at CHS I can make it into Georgia University. When I attend college I want to get my Degree in geology. I also want to go to Georgia because of baseball. I think they have the best college baseball team. As you can see, I love baseball. My favorite teams are between New York Yankees and the Phillies. If I had to choose between the two I would pick the Phillies.
The Most Important “F” is my friends. I always thought my best friends Will and Nate were better than me in school. Because they were at better schools then me. Now that that I am at CHS I know that is not true. I want to graduate in 2012 so that I can prove myself wrong.
There is no way I will not graduate because I have the best suppor behind me. I have my friend and family to support me. I also have my future to look foward to. I will work as hard as I can to make sure my dreams and wishes come true. I will make shure I graduate from high school, will you?
Mr. Romero I want you to grade my essay on transitions and my intro and conclusion.
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